I was told my story was too violent and should not read.
It’s real put into the Star Wars universe before Disney and has the Legend Yuuzhan Vong.
It is about the “Mother Jedi” trope. My character, AUSET LAH, is a lost padawan enslaved by pirates on an unknown planet. By the time she becomes an adult, she is labeled as a breeder. But she avoided being bred until she was caught and pilloried to be beaten by a knout as an example to the other slaves.
While beaten by the orange overseer, a squad of aliens witness the pain on AUSET that only a goddess could withstand. It was by faith that they saved her and took her to their synod.
She is the first Jedi youngling they captured for study.
This fanfic is from 2009. It is about Star Wars Legends characters, the Yuuzhan Vong and their attempt to integrate and adapt to the new galaxy — pre-invasion. But slowly, the Domains (great families) were getting anxious about living on their Worldships, large sea star creatures the size of a planet and all YV ships are living — and getting old and dying.
The concerns were if they did not terraform enough planets, they would die. Moreover, to find their heaven or nirvana planet, which was the one promised by their chief deity, Yun Yuuzhan who send his seed from their galaxy, the planet Yuuzhan’tar, they could not enter this new (SW) galaxy. A few Domains did not care that they had not found Yuuzhan’tar. So, they started to shape “dirtball” planets, like Rhommamool and Bimmiel. Planets that had too much technology on it were destroyed and broken into pieces to grow their living starships, like Serpindal and the Dobido moon. They would move planets from vacuum to ecological wonders. But the cost weighed in on the Force. And Force wielders sensed that even though they could not sense the Yuuzhan Vong.
It never chalked up to changes in astrometrics. Astute members of the galaxy realized the changes sensed by the Jedi, and then by the Sith were results of deliberate acts. But no civilization in the galaxy was powerful enough make those changes except the empires of old and powerful Force wielding entities like the Mortis gods. The movements were far outside the Force as reported in the Unknown Regions, Wild Space and Outer Rim and mostly primitive cultures, except the Chiss Ascendancy.
During the supplicant war called The Clone Wars: Hajj Praetorites met JEEDAI. They say their plasma blades with unlive metal casings as their wield it with their blasphemous Force. They tried to use it on our Vonduun Skerr Kyrric (crab armor) but it failed though our skin can be cauterized. More for the blessed pain — HROSHA GUL
Our…YUUZHAN VONG ADVANCED SCOUT SHIPS EAT KYBER CRYSTALS… pulverizing them by acid magma digestion and converting the energy into a focused long-lasting beam slicer.
Our Dread Weapons consume hulls. Finding and eating kyber crystals aboard infidel unlive metal ships is easy.
The Yuuzhan Vong groove. Lots of funky dancing. Free spiriting to get their holy ghosts on. Praise dancing. Coming to the Gods. As sacrifice unto them. They do not let a lot tied up their butts. They let it all hang out. So they liked Kool and the Gang’s Jungle Boogie.